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Zillatain
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swmartian
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swmartian
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5/23/2016 Should say K'Z'K CAN'T sense Gwynn around Captain Bo, right now it says he CAN.
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Ref link on 16-Aug-2016 says "Zalias Imprissoned"; should be "imprisoned".
Ref link on 18-Aug-2016 says "... lost in persuit of Oasis..."; should be "pursuit".
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garyfritz
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swmartian
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Zillatain
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http://sluggy.com/comics/archives/daily/170403Panel 2: Izzy is already arrived. That sentence seems odd. It should probably be more like, "Izzy has already arrived." or "Izzy already arrived." Panel 7: ...more important to worry about that Riff. Should be "than". Panel 9: ...makes me peemy my pants!" Should be "pee my".
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The following might just be me being pedantic (or tired). For the strip on 30-Mar-2017:In panel 5, Chaz says "Applying blame is not my department"; " Assigning blame..." might be better. In panel 6, Chaz says "...I'm applying that blame on you."; "...I'm assigning that blame to you." or "I blame you!" might be better.
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swmartian
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http://www.sluggy.com/comics/archives/daily/170411Apostrophes are wandering out of of place in Panel 2: "Betray em' all" should be "Betray 'em all" And unless Chen has multiple grandmothers named Betray M. All, then "grandmothers' " should be "grandmother's"
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yurak
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http://www.sluggy.com/comics/archives/daily/170419Panel 2. The could just be my eyes/screen, but it looks like there a full stop in place of a comma. Tricky to tell in full caps too. "You have a deal. But Daedalus Hereti stays here...." "You have a deal, but Daedalus Hereti stays here...."
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